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Why The Phantom Menace sucks–and why it matters.
Star Wars: Episode I, The Phantom Menace is, critically, the worst Star Wars film. It’s certified “rotten” on Rotten Tomatoes with an aggregated score of 55%, and it holds the lowest IMDB score of any film in the franchise (6.5). Though critical reaction was mixed upon release, the film has since fallen into notoriety–so much so, Disney refuses to set any of its new IP in the prequel time period, aside from two limited-run Marvel comics. (Or, at least, that was the case when I originally wrote this article.)
It’s also the film that began prioritizing product over story. Though The Phantom Menace sets the stage for every major cinematic achievement in the early 21st century, from The Lord of the Rings to Sin City, the film itself–sucks. It’s bloated, boring, tone deaf, and borderline offensive at times; it feels less like a story and more like a corporate Star Wars checklist: there are Jedi, lightsabers, royalty, chases, romances (sort of), Darth Vader (sort of), the Force (sort of), music, droids, spaceships, aliens, good guys, bad guys, comic relief, stars, and wars.
‘Did you read the opening crawl?’ Check.
‘Did you notice the John Williams score?’ Check.
‘Did you catch all the original trilogy references?’ Double check.
There’s so much content, there’s no time to stop and appreciate it. And there’s almost no reason to care about any of it: the stakes aren’t high enough, and the characters aren’t relatable enough.
The Plinkett Test
To illustrate, here’s a clip from Red Letter Media’s review of the film. In it, Mr. Plinkett asks people to describe characters from the prequel trilogy without referencing their appearances, job titles, or costumes. This is their response.
To no one’s surprise, prequel characters are hard to describe. Why? Because they have no character. Queen Amidala is her costume; Qui Gon Ginn is his job; Anakin Skywalker is his age. There’s nothing deeper that defines them. Original trilogy characters, by contrast, are much more vibrant. Han Solo is charming, cocky, and roguish. Chewbacca is a big softy; C-3PO is prissy. These characters are memorable because they have personalities. They aren’t just vessels to sell toys.
So what can we learn from The Phantom Menace? And how can those lessons affect the way we approach advertising copy?
Good ad copy tells good stories.
Imagine your favorite ad. It might be Allstate’s “Mayhem” campaign or Volkswagen’s “Lemon” ads. What single element do these ads share?
They tell stories.
Rick Boyko, former creative president of VCU’s Brandcenter, sums up the entire industry in one sentence: “We are storytellers in service of brands.” (Sullivan 143).
On paper, our job is to deliver leads and/or clicks for our clients. In reality, our job is to intrigue, entertain, and compel–to find the middle ground between the client, the audience, and ourselves and to force people to pause, reflect, and act. We are music makers, dreamers. Our work can literally change lives.
Want to go “viral”? Tell human truths.
But don’t just take my word for it. Several industry leaders preach this exact message. Ed Robinson, co-founder of the Viral Factory, insists that ads should use the truth to emotionally stir people. He writes:
“This is the key for us–does the idea hold a human truth which goes beyond us (An advertising agency getting paid to flog some stuff) and the client (who thinks only of their product). If it doesn’t then it has no viral potential” (Iezzi 86).
Simply put, we can’t move audiences with bland words. We can’t go viral without stories that tell hard truths.
Like The Phantom Menace, most ad copy I see at work treats content like a checklist:
What’s the product called? Check.
What is it? How much? Check.
Should I click to learn more? Double check.
Though necessary, these features alone will not sell products long-term. These basic ads present too much information and don’t tell a story. They don’t intrigue their audience, and they don’t compel them to click. (Yes, telling someone to click doesn’t actually work.) There is no “character”; instead, they feel cold, corporate, and calculated.
Got [Blue] Milk?
In the early 90s, milk was on the decline (can you believe it?). For over 100 years, marketing companies sold milk the same way: by listing benefits. “MILK BUILDS STRONG BONES!” While this strategy worked for most of the 20th century, it had soured (no pun intended) by the 90s. Enter Jeff Goodby. Instead of listing benefits, Goodby told a story through deprivation: “Got Milk?” The speaker doesn’t have milk, and they want it. There’s tension, there’s conflict, and it leaves the resolution hanging to inspire the consumer to act (Sullivan 145). This is the exact kind of writing we should be doing. ‘Call a recruiter” and “sign-on bonus available” will sour eventually. If it can happen to milk, it can happen to anything else.
Still don’t believe me? Let’s look at it a different way.
Using the Plinkett Test On Ad Copy
I work in B2B advertising for the trucking industry. Here are two competing headlines I saw the other day:
- Now Hiring Company Drivers
- Welcome to the Big Time
CTAs aside, how do these headlines make you feel? What’s your gut reaction to them?
Let’s run them through the Plinkett test. Describe the “speaker” in these headlines without describing what they look like, what they might be wearing, or what profession they might have.
Chances are, you can’t describe the “character” in the first ad–not without describing their clothing or job title. The person who writes “Now Hiring Company Drivers” probably sits at a cubicle and wears a polo, khakis, and one of those bulky telemarketer headsets. They want to sell you something.
The second speaker is much clearer. They’re a straight shooter, the kind of guy (or gal) who speaks from their chest and walks with a little swagger. Even when they’re not the boss, they command your respect. They are someone you can trust when the going gets tough: they won’t sugar coat bad news, and they won’t skimp out on congratulations.
You probably know someone like this. As a copywriter, I hope you do. And I hope my ad reminds you of them.
For funsies, I ran both lines through CoSchedule’s headline analyzer, which grades headlines on usage, frequency, and relevance. Here’s a link to their analyzer, if you’re interested.
The first scored a 30, and the second scored a 79. Whoa.
Simply stating the obvious doesn’t compel anyone to act. However–strong, emotional language that tells a story both builds a relationship between the ad and the audience and compels them to click.
FYI, I also ran “The Phantom Menace” through the CoSchedule headline analyzer. It scored a 41.
Let that sink in.
Anywho, that’s me this week. How do you use story in your ad copy?
Let me know in the comments.
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Iezzi, Teressa. The Idea Writers: Copywriting in a New Media and Marketing Era. Palgrave Macmillan, 2011.
Sullivan, Luke. Hey, Whipple, Squeeze This: The Classic Guide to Creating Great Ads, 4th Ed. John Wiley & Sons, 2012.
“Star Wars: The Phantom Menace Review.” Star Wars: The Phantom Menace Review, YouTube, 9 Apr. 2012, youtu.be/FxKtZmQgxrI.
Blogging is a part-time job. Literally.
Between brainstorming, researching, writing, editing, and posting, I spend about twenty hours per week creating content. For me, writing is that thing I do when I have nothing else to do. It’s my Netflix, my video games; it’s the glue that fills the cracks in my already packed life. I write in coffee shops, in waiting rooms, in transit–I started this post while eating a banana on my lunch break. But sometimes my schedule makes it hard to keep posts and deadlines straight. Enter kanban: a simple production flowchart that keeps work organized. It helps me stay afloat, and I think it can help you, too.
What is a Kanban?
A kanban is “a scheduling system for lean manufacturing and just-in-time manufacturing” (Wikipedia). Simply put, it’s a chart that visualizes, schedules, and track projects. I use mine to keep organized, assure quality, and set soft and hard deadlines for myself. It’s the only way I manage two blog posts per week, and it’s the most effective way to keep my fiction from stumbling over itself.
Note that ‘kanban’ isn’t a software; rather, it’s a word for a kind of software. I use Trello for my blog and Jira for work, but those aren’t the only programs out there. Kanban Tool, for example, has a clean, simple interface; Leankit is a little more intensive. My advice: play around and find the one that meets your needs.
Remember, it only works if you stick with it.
1. Manage your ideas.
Kanbans are great for dumping ideas.
As I’ve noted elsewhere, my production cycle starts on Saturday. I wake up, crack open a notebook, and jot down ten to fifteen post ideas. I rarely spend more than fifteen minutes brainstorming, and I almost always fill two 2×3 notebook pages. Some of those ideas are great; some are horrid. All end up in my Trello backlog. Whenever my fifteen minutes are up, I type them into my kanban. Then I tag them by type (green for evergreen; brown for “Morning Coffee“; red for my upcoming series) and sort them from “most excited to write” to “scraping the bottom of the idea barrel.”
2. Stay organized.
Remember that old Lisa Frank trapper keeper you wore out in middle school? Kanbans are like that, but without ripped holes and crumpled paper.
I split my Trello into six categories: backlog, researching, writing, editing, making graphics, and published. Each post lives somewhere on the board. That way, I always know what I’m writing, when it’s due, and how close it is to “done.” If I’m looking for blog ideas, I pull from the backlog. If I’m researching, I drop my findings into the “researching” category. So on; so forth. Rinse; repeat.
On average, I typically work on three posts at once: one short fiction post, one long fiction post, and one evergreen post. Without a dedicated flowchart, I’d have to rely completely on my memory and notes–and I have the brain of a goldfish and the handwriting of a med student. No bueno.
So do yourself a favor: kick Ms. Frank to the curb and get organized like a grown-up. You’ll thank yourself later.
3. Treat writing like car assembly.
Kanbans were invented by a Toyota employee, so it makes sense that they’re basically intellectual assembly lines. As a project progresses, its card moves along the kanban. When the card arrives in a category, it cannot (read: should not) move again until its respective parts have been assembled. For example, when I research, I attach my notes and references to the card. The card cannot move to “writing” without those attachments. That way, if I need to pull a quote or write a bibliography (or, for fiction, look up characters, items, events, or settings), I have everything on-hand. No need to scrounge around looking for it. It’s there, ready, whenever I need it.
4. Keep your writing and editing separate.
When I used to teach freshman composition, the biggest complaint I heard from students was this:
“Writing is so hard because every time I write something, it sounds stupid. So I end up erasing it, starting over, and erasing that, too. Gah!”
Have you ever had a similar experience? I know I have. Loads of times. Gah.
I’m not a great writer. I hardly call myself a good writer; all of my rough drafts read like they were written in crayon. But a good fifteen minutes with a red pen can clean up awkward phrases, tie up tangents, fix passive language, and change oddball verbiage.
But remember, you can’t fix anything until you’ve written it.
Having separate kanban categories for writing and editing helps me get more done by forcing me to focus on each separately. As soon as I’m done researching, I move the card into “writing,” and I vomit all of my thoughts onto the page. When I’m done, I transcribe the draft into WordPress, move the card into the “editing” category, and begin scanning for content errors. I refuse to edit while the post sits in “writing,” and I refuse to write new material while it sits in “editing.”
The “editing” phase is also where I format for SEO. It’s nearly impossible to draft with search engines in mind, so I don’t bother. I write first, edit second, and optimize third, and my title is almost always the last thing I write. That way, it aligns with my focus keyword, sub-headings, and editorial tone.
5. Regiment your time for tedious work.
Let’s face it: your post will never feel done. And the more you tinker with it, the less done it will feel.
It’s time to set soft deadlines for yourself. If you’re shooting for a 500-word post, regiment yourself about three hours to research, write, and edit, and set a due date that reflects your workload. With my work schedule, three hours of work takes about three days. If I brainstorm on Saturday, I typically set a soft post deadline for Wednesday morning, around 8 AM.
I like scheduling in my kanban because it allows me to not only set post due dates; it also allows me to set category due dates. Smaller deadlines allow me time to research, write, and edit well before my post deadline.
Remember, 1,500 words is daunting, but five sets of 300 words are do-able.
6. Catalog your victories.
Blogging is a lonely hobby. It’s long hours in front of a notebook, followed by long hours in front of a computer. It’s easy to get discouraged. That’s why I archive all my work on my Trello. Whenever I’m feeling blue, I like to gander at my completed tasks. That’s typically enough to spur me onward.
It’s also nice being able to recycle my notes. Finishing a post doesn’t suddenly make the work invalid. If you’ve done the legwork, then you should continue to use it. Whenever I find myself in a pinch, I finger through my archive and see if there’s anything useful I can dig back up. More often than not, there is.
Anywho, that’s me this week. What do you use to keep yourself organized? What does your post schedule look like? What kinds of software do you use to stay afloat?
Let me know in the comments.
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Blogging is about community. It’s about making real connections with others through comments, shared posts, feedback, and team-ups. It’s about working together to create something new and special. And if it weren’t for people like you, I still wouldn’t know the first thing about proper SEO, crossposting, graphic design, or scheduling. But here I am, five months in with about 100 subscribers and a growing, steady readership. But we aren’t done just yet. Let’s grow that community. Let’s collaborate by writing together and featuring each other.
So, writers, artists, designers–email me, and let’s ring in the new year by making something cool together.
There’s something in the water. And everybody’s drinking it.
Irrecollections has (and always will be) a haven for fresh-squeezed content, both fiction and nonfiction.
To better meet your needs, we’re undergoing some renovations. Major renovations. And we’re pretty damn pumped about it. The metadata’s all packed, old articles have been trashed, and all-new content’s primed and waiting to post. All that remains is a flip of the switch.
And the best part–you don’t have to go anywhere. Same address, new house.
Thanks for all of your support. Thanks for all the comments and emails; thanks for the notes and encouragement. You’re the best.
I did it. I reached the door. Now, I regret everything.